優(yōu)秀英語(yǔ)作文欣賞
英語(yǔ)六級(jí)作文范文：人和計(jì)算機(jī) Computer and Man
Computer and Man
Ever since the birth of it, the computer has largely changed human being’s life and there has been a hot debate about its effects on humans. Undeniably, computers have taken the place of humans in many areas and it seems that computers begin to think like man, but this does not necessarily lead to the danger that man will think like computers.
The reasons, in my opinion, are as follows. Firstly, when computers release human from repetitive tasks, humans themselves can spend more time on creative works, such as scientific research, which require imagination and cannot be completed by computers. Meanwhile, thanks to computers, humans get more spare time with their friends and family, which enhances their happiness. Moreover, even though computers can work automatically, the premise is that the program, which is written by humans, has been installed in it.
In conclusion, humans, unlike computers, have creative ability, emotional desires and social bounds. Thus, I don’t think that there will be the danger that man will begin to think like the computer.
人和計(jì)算機(jī)
自從它的誕生，計(jì)算機(jī)已經(jīng)極大地改變了人類(lèi)的生活，有了它對(duì)人類(lèi)的影響熱議。不可否認(rèn)，電腦已經(jīng)在很多領(lǐng)域代替人看來(lái)，電腦開(kāi)始認(rèn)為這樣的人，但這并不一定導(dǎo)致危險(xiǎn)，男人會(huì)像計(jì)算機(jī)一樣思考。
的`原因，在我看來(lái)，如下。首先，當(dāng)電腦釋放人類(lèi)從重復(fù)性的任務(wù)，人類(lèi)自己能花更多的時(shí)間去創(chuàng)作的作品，如科學(xué)研究，這需要想象力和不能由計(jì)算機(jī)完成。同時(shí)，由于計(jì)算機(jī)，人類(lèi)得到更多的空余時(shí)間與他們的朋友和家人，這增強(qiáng)了他們的幸福。此外，盡管計(jì)算機(jī)能夠自動(dòng)工作，前提是這些程序，這是人寫(xiě)的，被安裝在了它。
總之，人類(lèi)，不像電腦，有創(chuàng)新能力，情感的欲望和社會(huì)的界限。因此，我不認(rèn)為會(huì)有人會(huì)開(kāi)始喜歡電腦，認(rèn)為危險(xiǎn)。
滿(mǎn)分作文 A Letter to the Headmaster 給校長(zhǎng)的一封信
Dear Headmaster,
I am the minister of students' life in the Student Union. On behalf of all the students, I am writing to you to give our opinions about the canteen.
Our canteen has something satisfactory and something unsatisfactory as well. To our satisfaction, many kinds of the food are supplied to us. Besides this, the food is cheap and tastes good. We all enjoy the food. And the surroundings in the canteen have also been improved. But the quantity of a helping they give is not enough. The seats are not enough as well.Some students have no seats when eating.
Finally we advise them to improve the quality of the food and their service. We will feel very happy if these problems can be solved.
Yours,
XXX
尊敬的校長(zhǎng)：
我是學(xué)生會(huì)生活部部長(zhǎng)。我代表所有學(xué)生給您寫(xiě)信反映一下我們對(duì)食堂的意見(jiàn)。
食堂有令人滿(mǎn)意的一面也有令人不滿(mǎn)意的一面;令我們滿(mǎn)意的是，食堂給我們提供了很多種類(lèi)的食物。另外，飯菜價(jià)格便宜，味道可口，我們很喜歡。而且食堂環(huán)境也已經(jīng)改善了。但是他們給的食物的'分量不足。食堂的座位也不夠，一些學(xué)生吃飯時(shí)沒(méi)有座位。我們希望學(xué)校會(huì)考慮增添些座位。
最后我們建議他們改進(jìn)飯菜的質(zhì)量，改善服務(wù)。如果這些問(wèn)題能被解決我們會(huì)感到非常高興。
尊敬您的 XXX
網(wǎng)購(gòu) Doing Shopping Online
�。ê笔撸┘偃缒阏跁�(shū)店購(gòu)書(shū)。你對(duì)Around China和Olympic English這兩本書(shū)愛(ài)不釋手，但你只有40元錢(qián)。請(qǐng)參看下表，就這兩本書(shū)的相關(guān)內(nèi)容(content)進(jìn)行比較，選擇購(gòu)買(mǎi)其中的一本，并簡(jiǎn)要陳述你的理由。
要求：1.請(qǐng)首先把你選擇購(gòu)買(mǎi)的書(shū)籍名稱(chēng)填在文首的橫線(xiàn)上；
2.內(nèi)容連貫，述理有據(jù)；
3.詞數(shù)要求：80詞左右。
Books Price Contents
Around China 39yuan the history, culture, places of interest about China
Olympic English 27yuan English and knowledge about the Olympic Games
I will buy ______________________ . _________________________________________________
范文：
I will buy Olympic English. It is said that learning a new language can open up another world. I am also able to understand a new way of life. So I want to learn how to speak English well. Furthermore, the 2008 Olympic Games will be held in Beijing soon. This book teaches me a lot about the Olympic Games, too. And it is cheaper than Around China. Therefore, I think it's better for me to choose Olympic English.
I will buy Around China. Though it is more expensive than Olympic English, I believe it is a more careful choice. I am interested in traveling. And I dream of going sightseeing throughout China in the future. The book is full of knowledge about Chinese history, culture and places of interest. It can take me into a wonderful world. At the same time, reading Around China is a good way to relax. So I will decide to buy Around China.
我會(huì)買(mǎi)奧運(yùn)英語(yǔ)。據(jù)說(shuō)學(xué)了一門(mén)新的語(yǔ)言可以打開(kāi)另一個(gè)世界。我也能理解一種新的生活方式。所以我想學(xué)習(xí)如何講英語(yǔ)。此外，2008屆奧運(yùn)會(huì)即將在北京舉行。這本書(shū)教我很多關(guān)于奧運(yùn)會(huì)的事。而且比中國(guó)便宜。因此，我認(rèn)為選擇奧林匹克英語(yǔ)對(duì)我來(lái)說(shuō)是更好的選擇。
我會(huì)在中國(guó)買(mǎi)。雖然比奧林匹克英語(yǔ)更貴，我相信這是一個(gè)更仔細(xì)的選擇。我對(duì)旅游感興趣。我夢(mèng)想將來(lái)在中國(guó)觀光。這本書(shū)充滿(mǎn)了關(guān)于中國(guó)歷史、文化和興趣的知識(shí)。它可以帶我進(jìn)入一個(gè)美妙的世界。同時(shí)，在中國(guó)讀書(shū)是放松的好方法。所以我將決定在中國(guó)各地購(gòu)買(mǎi)。
2、網(wǎng)上購(gòu)物 Doing Shopping Online
With the help of the Internet, shopping is not a difficult job. Just click your mouse to choose the article you like, and the shopping is finished. You needn't step out of the room.
It seems easy and quick. But there's always a trap online. If you are careless, it will bring you some trouble. You may find the color of the article is different from what you want, or the size is either too small or too big. If you want to be different, you'd better not buy clothes online.
Once you put on the clothes you bought online and go out, you will find many people wear the same clothes in the street.
在互聯(lián)網(wǎng)的`幫助下，購(gòu)物不是一個(gè)困難的工作。只要按你的鼠標(biāo)選擇你喜歡的文章，并完成購(gòu)物。你不必走出房間。
似乎容易和快速。但網(wǎng)上總有一個(gè)陷阱。如果你不小心，它會(huì)給你帶來(lái)麻煩。你可能會(huì)發(fā)現(xiàn)這篇文章的顏色與你想要的不同，或者說(shuō)的尺寸太小或太大。如果你想與眾不同，你最好不要在網(wǎng)上買(mǎi)衣服。
一旦你穿上了你在網(wǎng)上買(mǎi)的衣服，你會(huì)發(fā)現(xiàn)很多人在街上穿著相同的衣服。
高考英語(yǔ)滿(mǎn)分作文及名師評(píng)析 寫(xiě)信 Letter
高考英語(yǔ)滿(mǎn)分作文
[全國(guó)卷I]
【試題回放】
假定你是李華，正是英國(guó)牛津參加短期語(yǔ)言培訓(xùn)，計(jì)劃星期天去倫敦旅游�；ヂ�(lián)網(wǎng)上一則廣告引起了你的注意，但一些具體信息不明確(箭頭所指內(nèi)容)。請(qǐng)給該旅行社發(fā)一封電子郵件，詢(xún)問(wèn)有關(guān)情況。
注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右，信的格式已為你寫(xiě)好。
2.可根據(jù)內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。
3.參考詞匯：牛津——Oxford 費(fèi)用——fee
Dear Sir/Madame,
I’m writing for more information about the day tour to London.
As a student at Oxford University, I’d like to know if you have any special price for students. As for the money you charge, does it cover the entrance fees for visiting the places listed? What about lunch? Is it included? Or do I need to bring along my own food?
How long will the tour last? Since I need to prepare my lessons for the nest day, I’d like to know the time to return. Besides, is there any time for shopping? I really want to have a look at the big stores in London.
Yours,
Li Hua
尊敬的先生/女士，
我寫(xiě)的更多的信息，在倫敦的一日游。
作為牛津大學(xué)的一名學(xué)生，我想知道你是否對(duì)學(xué)生有特殊的價(jià)格。至于你所收取的錢(qián)，它是否包括了所列地方的入場(chǎng)費(fèi)？午飯?jiān)趺礃�？是否包括？還是我需要帶上我自己的食物？
巡演將持續(xù)多久？因?yàn)槲倚枰獪?zhǔn)備好我的功課，我想知道的時(shí)間，返回。再說(shuō)，還有沒(méi)有時(shí)間去購(gòu)物？我真的很想看看倫敦的大商店。
你的，
李華
[名師點(diǎn)評(píng)]
本文是根據(jù)畫(huà)面的提示來(lái)寫(xiě)一封電子郵件。作者在文章中首先把握了全部的要點(diǎn)，敘述較為完整;其次，作者運(yùn)用一些過(guò)渡句和銜接詞將文章串聯(lián)，意思連貫。文章中采用了第一人稱(chēng)和一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，這是值得肯定的地方。
[全國(guó)卷Ⅲ](四川、云南、陜西等地區(qū)用)
【試題回放】假設(shè)你是李華，最近國(guó)內(nèi)一家英文報(bào)紙正在討論北京動(dòng)物園是否應(yīng)遷出市區(qū)。以下是你所在班級(jí)討論的情況。請(qǐng)你給該報(bào)寫(xiě)一封信，反映討論結(jié)果。
贊成遷出：反對(duì)遷出：
1.游客多，交通堵塞
2.郊區(qū)環(huán)境好1.建于1906年，中外聞名
2.搬遷易造成動(dòng)物死亡
注意：1.詞數(shù)100字左右，信的開(kāi)頭已為你寫(xiě)好。
2.可根據(jù)內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。
3.參考詞匯： 郊區(qū)—suburb
Dear Editor ,
Recently ,in our class there has been a heated discussion about whether the Beijing Zoo should be moved out of the city . Some of my classmates are in favor of the move .They say large crowds of tourists to the zoo will result in traffic jams .They also say that once moved ,animals will have more space and better living conditions in the suburbs .However ,other students are against the idea ,saying that the Beijing Zoo, built in 1906 ,has a history of 100 years ,and is well –known at home and abroad .So it should remain where it is .What’s more ,moving may cause the death of some animals .To move or not ,this is a big decision which has to be made by people in Beijing.
Yours truly,
Li Hua
親愛(ài)的編輯，
最近，在我們班上，有一個(gè)激烈的討論，北京動(dòng)物園是否應(yīng)該搬出城市。一些同學(xué)都贊成的舉動(dòng)。他們說(shuō)大量的游客到動(dòng)物園將導(dǎo)致交通堵塞。他們還說(shuō)，曾經(jīng)的感動(dòng)，動(dòng)物將有更大的空間和更好的生活條件在郊區(qū)。然而，其他學(xué)生都反對(duì)這個(gè)主意，說(shuō)的北京動(dòng)物園，建于1906年，有100多年的歷史，，好–已知在國(guó)內(nèi)和國(guó)外。所以它應(yīng)該保持，它是。什么是更多，移動(dòng)可能會(huì)造成一些動(dòng)物的死亡。移動(dòng)或不，這是一個(gè)大的決定是由北京人。
你真正的，
李華
[名師點(diǎn)評(píng)]
這篇文章寫(xiě)得還是比較精彩的。要點(diǎn)表達(dá)得完整而準(zhǔn)確，清楚展示了主題。先提出了文章的`主題，進(jìn)而列出了贊成的觀點(diǎn)及其相關(guān)的理由，同時(shí)在其后又給出了反面的觀點(diǎn)，論據(jù)十分充足。文章結(jié)構(gòu)嚴(yán)謹(jǐn)，前后連貫。
【北京卷】
【試題回放】
第一節(jié)情景作文(20分)
美國(guó)中學(xué)生jeff將要來(lái)你所在的紅星中學(xué)學(xué)習(xí)中文，經(jīng)協(xié)商安排住在你家。假設(shè)你是李華，請(qǐng)給Jeff寫(xiě)一封信，按照下圖順序介紹他來(lái)中國(guó)后的生活安排。
注意：1. 信的開(kāi)頭已為你寫(xiě)好。
2.詞數(shù)不少于60。
Dear Jeff,
I’m Hua from Beijing Hongxing Middle School. I’m very happy to learn that you’re going to stay with my family while you’re in Beijing.
While you are here, we’ll provide you with a room of your own with a bed, a desk, a couple of chairs and a TV. You’ll also have your own bathroom. Our school is quite close to our home, so we could go to school together by bike. At noon we’ll eat at the school dining hall. I’m sure you’ll like the delicious Chinese food there, and enjoy talking with friends over lunch. Classes in our school usually finish at 4 in the afternoon. You can then join other students in playing ball games or swimming. It’ll be a lot of fun.
If you have any questions or requests, please let me know. We’ll try our best to make your stay here in Beijing a pleasant experience.
Best wishes,
Li Hua
親愛(ài)的杰夫，
我華從北京紅星中學(xué)。我很高興得知你在北京的時(shí)候會(huì)和我的家人在一起。
當(dāng)你在這里，我們會(huì)為你提供一個(gè)你自己的房間，一張床，一張桌子，幾把椅子和一臺(tái)電視機(jī)。你也有自己的浴室。我們學(xué)校離我們家很近，所以我們可以騎自行車(chē)去上學(xué)。中午我們?cè)趯W(xué)校食堂吃飯。我敢肯定你會(huì)喜歡那里的美味的中國(guó)菜，喜歡和朋友一起吃午飯。我們學(xué)校的課程通常在下午4點(diǎn)完成。你可以和其他同學(xué)一起玩球類(lèi)或游泳。這將是一個(gè)很大的樂(lè)趣。
如果您有任何問(wèn)題或要求，請(qǐng)讓我知道。我們將盡我們最大的努力，使您在這里的逗留在北京愉快的體驗(yàn)。
最美好的祝愿，
李華
[名師點(diǎn)評(píng)]
這篇文章的特點(diǎn)還是比較清晰的，第一，作者根據(jù)圖畫(huà)將文章的要點(diǎn)概括完整，內(nèi)容充實(shí)而豐富，結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，有層次感;第二，本文沒(méi)有采用華麗的辭藻，但用詞十分恰當(dāng)，段落過(guò)渡自然，令人耳目一新。
高考英語(yǔ)滿(mǎn)分作文 The school should organize students outing
春天是旅游的好季節(jié),某外國(guó)語(yǔ)學(xué)校校長(zhǎng)要求各班同學(xué)就春游一事展開(kāi)討論.討論的主題是:學(xué)校要不要組織學(xué)生春游.校長(zhǎng)還要求班長(zhǎng)就討論的情況用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一封信給他.
假定你是某班班長(zhǎng)李華,請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下列表格中的信息客觀地介紹討論情況.
注意:1,信的格式已為你寫(xiě)好;2,詞數(shù):100左右;3,生詞:拓寬 broaden
70%的學(xué)生贊成春游
30%的學(xué)生反對(duì)春游
1. 可以領(lǐng)略大自然的優(yōu)美風(fēng)景;
2. 拓寬視野,增長(zhǎng)知識(shí);
3. 呼吸新鮮空氣,有益于身體健康.
1. 時(shí)間緊,耽誤學(xué)習(xí);
2. 增加父母經(jīng)濟(jì)負(fù)擔(dān);
3. 擔(dān)心安全.
范文
Dear Headmaster,
I'm writing to tell you about the discussion we've had on whether the school should organize a spring outing for the students.
Opinions on the question are pided as follows:70% of the students think that the school should organize the spring outing. They believe that the spring outing can make them enjoy the nature's beautiful scenery, which can broaden our vision and fill us with more knowledge. They also say that the air in the open fields is fresher. What's more, fresh air does a lot of good to our health.
On the other hand,30% don't like the idea of going out for a spring outing. In their opinions, time is very precious, so they have to grasp every minute to work hard at their lessons. Traveling costs a lot. In that case, it will add to their families' burden. Above all, no one can be sure of the safety of every student.
Yours truly
Li Hua
尊敬的校長(zhǎng)，
我寫(xiě)信告訴你關(guān)于學(xué)校是否應(yīng)該組織一次春季郊游的討論。
對(duì)問(wèn)題的看法有如下：70%的學(xué)生認(rèn)為學(xué)校應(yīng)該組織“春季郊游”。他們認(rèn)為，春季郊游可以使他們享受大自然的美麗的風(fēng)景，它可以擴(kuò)大我們的'視野，使我們更多的知識(shí)。他們還說(shuō)，在空曠的田野的空氣很清新。更新鮮的空氣對(duì)我們的健康有很大的健康。
另一方面，30%不喜歡外出郊游的想法。在他們的觀點(diǎn)中，時(shí)間是非常寶貴的，所以他們要抓緊每一分的努力，在他們的課程中努力學(xué)習(xí)。旅游成本很多。在這種情況下，它會(huì)增加他們家庭的負(fù)擔(dān)。首先，沒(méi)有人能確保每個(gè)學(xué)生的安全。
你真正的
李華
中考英語(yǔ)作文模板：The computer
The computer is widely used in education，and some people think teachers do not play important roles in the classroom. To what extend do you agree or disagree?
In this period of communication, computer has been used in all kinds of fields widely, and plays a particular role in our lives. Especially computer has become more and more important in educational field, therefore dozens of people considered teachers could be replaced computers that will go with the current of the times. The above point is certainly wrong; this essay will outline three reasons.
The main reason is that people's brain better than computer. Firstly, people design all kinds of computer's programs. Secondly, computer doesn't have logistic ideation. Computer only can defend on that designer inputted computer's programs to judge a question's right or wrong. In other words, computer can't defend on thinking that computer independently analyzes a question's right or wrong. In case, designer inputted programs that are wrong. Computer output the result that also will be wrong. If this kind of problem happened in classroom, students would be infused plenty of wrong information.
Another reason is that computer's programs designed software of education that could be amended difficultly. If software of education of bugs were found, commonly these of problems couldn't be solved in the classroom. The software was amended that means total of program were corrected, not only parts of program were ed or amended usually.
Last but not the least reason is computer is mechanical, it couldn't be suited all kinds of students and different demands. As students' intellect is different, same of software couldn't base on every status of student to set a perfect project.
In conclusion, computers couldn't instead of the position of teachers in the classroom, however computer is an absolutely good helper for teacher.
計(jì)算機(jī)計(jì)算機(jī)在教育領(lǐng)域中的廣泛應(yīng)用，一些人認(rèn)為沒(méi)有老師在課堂上發(fā)揮重要作用。你同意還是不同意？在這一時(shí)期的通信，計(jì)算機(jī)已被應(yīng)用于各種領(lǐng)域廣泛，并且在我們的生活中起著獨(dú)特的作用。尤其是在教育領(lǐng)域，計(jì)算機(jī)已成為越來(lái)越重要的作用，因此教師數(shù)十人認(rèn)為可以取代電腦，將順應(yīng)時(shí)代的潮流。上述觀點(diǎn)肯定是錯(cuò)誤的；本文將概述三個(gè)原因。主要的原因是，人們的大腦比電腦。首先，人們?cè)O(shè)計(jì)了各種各樣的計(jì)算機(jī)程序。其次，計(jì)算機(jī)沒(méi)有邏輯思維能力。計(jì)算機(jī)只能在該設(shè)計(jì)師保衛(wèi)輸入計(jì)算機(jī)的程序來(lái)判斷問(wèn)題的對(duì)錯(cuò)。換句話(huà)說(shuō)，計(jì)算機(jī)不能捍衛(wèi)獨(dú)立思考的計(jì)算機(jī)分析問(wèn)題的正確或錯(cuò)誤。在情況下，輸入的`程序設(shè)計(jì)是錯(cuò)誤的。計(jì)算機(jī)輸出的結(jié)果，也將是錯(cuò)誤的。如果這類(lèi)問(wèn)題發(fā)生在課堂上，學(xué)生將注入大量的錯(cuò)誤信息。另一個(gè)原因是計(jì)算機(jī)程序設(shè)計(jì)的軟件教育可以修改難。如果教育軟件的漏洞被發(fā)現(xiàn)，通常這類(lèi)問(wèn)題不能在課堂上解決。該軟件進(jìn)行了修訂，這意味著總計(jì)劃得到糾正，不僅在程序部分，插入或修改通常。最后但并非最不重要的原因是計(jì)算機(jī)的機(jī)械，它不可能適合學(xué)生和各種不同的要求。學(xué)生的智力是不同的，相同的軟件無(wú)法根據(jù)每一個(gè)學(xué)生的身份設(shè)定一個(gè)完美的計(jì)劃�？傊�(jì)算機(jī)不能代替教師在課堂上的位置，但是計(jì)算機(jī)是教師絕對(duì)的好幫手。
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