初中英語作文(五篇)
初中英語作文寫作技巧
一.寫作準(zhǔn)備階段
(一)消除恐懼心理
自英語普及后,根據(jù)社會(huì)要求,杜絕“啞巴英語”,大多數(shù)的學(xué)校都從一年級就開設(shè)英語課程,到了四年級,學(xué)生的口頭表達(dá)能力都很好,筆頭方面就相對弱了。進(jìn)行英語寫作,他們就會(huì)覺得不自信,覺得自己水平達(dá)不到,能力也夠不上。針對這點(diǎn),就得需要教師在教學(xué)中,根據(jù)學(xué)生的實(shí)際能力安排教學(xué)。學(xué)生是教學(xué)的主體,要想教學(xué)有效果,就必須發(fā)揮學(xué)生的主動(dòng)性。學(xué)生怕寫作,一方面是覺得自己的所積累的詞匯量和句子不夠多,教師在教學(xué)中注重適量的拓展和培養(yǎng)積累單詞,詞組的好習(xí)慣,對句子進(jìn)行舉一反三的說。另一方面學(xué)生怕在寫作中犯錯(cuò),怕會(huì)因?yàn)橐恍┬″e(cuò)誤就受到老師的批評,就這方面,教師在指導(dǎo)時(shí)應(yīng)多給予鼓勵(lì),只有讓他們認(rèn)識到了錯(cuò)誤,改正了,才會(huì)減少錯(cuò)誤,在鼓勵(lì)中增強(qiáng)學(xué)生的自信心,從而消除他們對寫作的恐懼感。
(二)創(chuàng)設(shè)寫作環(huán)境
環(huán)境是非常重要的因素,人的成長需要好的環(huán)境,寫作當(dāng)然也要求有個(gè)好的環(huán)境。況且,寫作是個(gè)復(fù)雜的思維過程,環(huán)境在此更顯其重要性。在教學(xué)中,教師可以精心為學(xué)生創(chuàng)設(shè)一個(gè)積極、合作和富有鼓勵(lì)性的環(huán)境,使他們樂于寫作,充分發(fā)揮自己的思維能力。比如,在中年級的英語教學(xué)中可以安排學(xué)生對練習(xí)冊上的短小語段摘抄下來,讀讀背背,培養(yǎng)語感;在高年級的英語教學(xué)中,可以安排寫英語日記,一組的學(xué)生的共用一本日記本,每天由一位同學(xué)帶回家寫英語日記,內(nèi)容及多少都不限制。老師每次都得對日記進(jìn)行認(rèn)真批改和給予鼓勵(lì)性的評價(jià)。學(xué)生可以傳閱,在其中他們能分享成功的喜悅,也擴(kuò)大閱讀量。
(三)傳授基本知識
寫作就像蓋房子一樣,有了材料,要把這材料以一定的形式堆放在一起才能形成房屋,這都需要老師的指導(dǎo)。英語寫作技能的難度較大,學(xué)生也不能很快接受,提高英語寫作質(zhì)量也不容易,教師在進(jìn)行英語寫作教學(xué)時(shí),要特別注意教學(xué)目標(biāo)與學(xué)生特點(diǎn),采用適當(dāng)?shù)慕虒W(xué)方法,傳授基本的寫作知識。
1.科學(xué)指導(dǎo)學(xué)生對單詞的識記,提高單詞拼寫的正確率,減少不必要的拼寫錯(cuò)誤。教師可以引導(dǎo)學(xué)生在閱讀過程中和其他課內(nèi)外學(xué)習(xí)中養(yǎng)成記單詞的好習(xí)慣,同時(shí)也要鼓勵(lì)學(xué)生注重詞組及常用句型的積累,同時(shí)也要給與適合的場合讓他們輸出。
2.語法是英語學(xué)習(xí)中非常煩瑣,枯燥的一項(xiàng),小學(xué)生很難接受,但在教學(xué)中適當(dāng)?shù)眠M(jìn)行句法結(jié)構(gòu)操練還是必要的。讓學(xué)生自然地接受語言結(jié)構(gòu),以便他們在寫作時(shí)能正確地表情達(dá)意。
3.漢英表達(dá)存在著差異,如Ilikeit,too.中文的正確表達(dá)是:我也喜歡它。不會(huì)說成:我喜歡他,也。這就是中文和英文在詞序上的不同,也是一種習(xí)慣表達(dá)的不同。沒有特定的規(guī)律,這就需要學(xué)生多閱讀,培養(yǎng)好的語感。
4.標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號雖是小問題但不可忽視,教師應(yīng)對此進(jìn)行講解,把兩種語言中的標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號的用法不同進(jìn)行比較,闡明正確使用標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號對正確表達(dá)思想十分重要。如,在表示一個(gè)人說話,漢語中用冒號和雙引號,在英語中是沒有冒號的,要表示一個(gè)人說話,得用逗號和雙引號。
二.寫作訓(xùn)練階段
寫作包括能用所學(xué)詞匯、語法和句型造簡單的句子、回答問題、改寫課文、看圖寫話、依照學(xué)過的題材寫小短文。這些需要循序漸進(jìn),要從最簡單的語言和言語練習(xí)開始,從基本要求做起,由易到難,逐步提高要求,每一步都要有具體要求,切實(shí)可行。
(一)句的訓(xùn)練
詞連成句,造句是英語寫作教學(xué)的主要練習(xí)形式之一。可以先由教師提供詞素,讓學(xué)生學(xué)會(huì)連句,熟悉句子結(jié)構(gòu),為以后造句打下基礎(chǔ)。教師也可以在教授一種句型結(jié)構(gòu)時(shí)讓學(xué)生改句子。而后,讓學(xué)生自己造句,教師常?梢詾閷W(xué)生造句提供一個(gè)結(jié)合實(shí)際生活的情景,這樣可以避免注重語言形式,忽視內(nèi)容,脫離一定的情景與主題。
句型轉(zhuǎn)換也是訓(xùn)練形式之一,讓學(xué)生在不改變語言意義的前提下進(jìn)行句型轉(zhuǎn)換練習(xí),理解表達(dá)同一個(gè)意思可以采用不同的句型,這樣可以避免寫作時(shí)句型的單調(diào)與重復(fù)。
(二)段的訓(xùn)練
句連成段,可以進(jìn)行看圖寫作,教師出示一幅圖,讓學(xué)生對其進(jìn)行描述寫成小段?磮D寫作有其長處,可以在寫作過程中可以增加圖片與英語思維、表達(dá)的直接聯(lián)系、培養(yǎng)想象力、減少對中文的依賴。為了使學(xué)生更多地參與寫作教學(xué),激發(fā)他們對寫作的興趣,看圖寫作的圖畫老師可以讓學(xué)生自己根據(jù)
喜好,選擇適合他們水平的圖畫或照片,帶到課堂上使用。圖畫生動(dòng)多樣,大大激發(fā)了他們的寫作興趣,可以選一部分優(yōu)秀的進(jìn)行展示,評價(jià),相互學(xué)習(xí),這樣能提高學(xué)生的整體水平。
(三)短文的訓(xùn)練
提供學(xué)生一些生活化的話題,選擇的話題材料要接近學(xué)生的現(xiàn)實(shí)生活和學(xué)習(xí)。比如學(xué)生可以寫自我介紹,寫最喜歡的動(dòng)物,學(xué)生會(huì)很活躍地思考,用最簡單的句子表達(dá)他們的意思,表達(dá)他們的感情。
同時(shí),也可以是對書本內(nèi)容進(jìn)行的擴(kuò)充,如《牛津小學(xué)英語5B》,Unit4中出現(xiàn)了writeane-mail,在這里可以補(bǔ)充教授書信的格式,通過網(wǎng)絡(luò)讓學(xué)生學(xué)會(huì)用電子郵件發(fā)信,教師可以讓學(xué)生結(jié)合自己的實(shí)際,與自己的朋友寫e-mail,但要做到有信必回,這樣才是有效的訓(xùn)練。如6B講到 seasons時(shí)可以給他們一個(gè)topic:Whichseasondoyoulikebest?Why?這樣的話題是他們自己切身感受,學(xué)生們可以暢所欲言。
(四)閱讀的訓(xùn)練
俗話說:讀書破萬卷,下筆如有神。閱讀是寫作的基礎(chǔ),大量的,廣泛的閱讀,能加強(qiáng)學(xué)生理解和吸收書面信息的能力,有助于鞏固和擴(kuò)大詞匯量,增強(qiáng)語感豐富學(xué)生的語言知識。教師可以指導(dǎo)學(xué)生讀一些相同水平的文章、故事,記憶背誦一些典型的范文也是可以的。讓學(xué)生在大量的閱讀中積累詞匯、句子,形成良好的語感,為學(xué)生更好的寫作打下堅(jiān)實(shí)的基礎(chǔ)。
三.如何評價(jià)寫作內(nèi)容
學(xué)生的作文要及時(shí)地批改,對學(xué)生在寫作中出現(xiàn)的錯(cuò)誤,可以用一些柔和的方式指出,并給予他們指導(dǎo),告訴他們怎么錯(cuò)了,訂正在邊上(訂正在原位會(huì)使他們忽略他們的錯(cuò)誤),知道正確答案,再加以鼓勵(lì)。這樣,他們會(huì)慢慢積累知識。即使有學(xué)生的錯(cuò)誤很多,也不要說“寫得不行,不好”之類的話,打擊他們的積極性,可以給予他們一些建議,給予他們多些指導(dǎo)這樣會(huì)更好。
對于寫的好的,可以當(dāng)場給予表揚(yáng)和鼓勵(lì),把好的文章讀給大家聽或者展貼出來,其余學(xué)生可以一起分享。俗話說“樂此不疲”,要學(xué)好一種東西,興趣是至關(guān)重要的。它是獲得知識進(jìn)行創(chuàng)造性創(chuàng)作的一種自覺動(dòng)機(jī),是鼓舞和推動(dòng)學(xué)生創(chuàng)作的內(nèi)在動(dòng)力,也是提高寫作水平的重要途徑。因此,在寫作教學(xué)中要鼓勵(lì)學(xué)生創(chuàng)作,培養(yǎng)他們創(chuàng)作的興趣,好的作品可以將它們推薦到小學(xué)生學(xué)習(xí)報(bào)刊、雜志。這樣,學(xué)生的積極性就調(diào)動(dòng)了,他們也覺得有成就感,也更樂于寫作了。
寫作在英語教學(xué)中是不可忽略的一項(xiàng),也是學(xué)生最難接受的。“寶劍鋒從磨礪出,梅花香自苦寒來。”“滴水穿石非一日之功,冰凍三尺非一日之寒。”教師合理教學(xué),學(xué)生長期持之以恒,做生活的有心人,做勤勞的小蜜蜂,多思考,多練筆,一定能對寫作產(chǎn)生濃厚興趣,提高英語寫作能力。為今后的英語學(xué)習(xí)打下結(jié)實(shí)的基礎(chǔ)。
初中英語作文范例一
My school
I am Alice. I am a student of No.1 Middle School. I study in Class Two Grade Seven.
There is a map of our school on the wall. The playground is in the middle of the school. On the left of the playground, there is a library. I like reading very much, so I often read books in the library. There is a teaching building behind the library. We study in that building. My classroom is on the second floor in that building. The teachers' offices are in that building, too. Where is the sport hall? Oh, it's on the right of the teaching building. I have P.E class in the sport hall. The canteen is in front of the sport hall. We have lunch and dinner in the canteen. In the school, I feel very happy!
This is my school. It's a big and nice place. I like my school very much. What about your school?
我的學(xué)校
我是愛麗絲。我是一中的一名學(xué)生。我在七年級二班。
墻上有一張我們學(xué)校的地圖。操場在學(xué)校的中間。操場左邊是圖書館。我非常喜歡閱讀,所以我經(jīng)常在圖書館里看書。圖書館后面有一座教學(xué)樓。我們在那棟樓里面學(xué)習(xí)。我的教室在二樓。教師辦公室也是在那棟樓。體育館在哪里呢?噢,在教學(xué)樓的右邊。我在體育館上體育課。食堂在體育館的前面。我們在食堂吃午飯和晚飯。在學(xué)校,我覺得很開心!
這是我的學(xué)校。是一個(gè)又大又漂亮的地方。我非常喜歡我的學(xué)校。你的學(xué)校是怎么樣的呢?
初中英語作文范例二
My goodfriend
I have a goodfriend,He is a boy,he has a very nice name—Robert.He comes from England.He has big eyes,they are round and cute.He comes to China with his parents.We know each other since last year.From then on,we become goodfriends.
At weekends,we often get together to play basketball,he plays it very well,and,he sings well,too.He teaches me English and I teach him Chinese.
We are goodfriends forever.
我的好朋友
我有一個(gè)好朋友,他是一個(gè)男孩,他有一個(gè)非常好聽的名字—羅伯特。他來自英格蘭,他有一對大眼睛,它們很圓很可愛。他和他的父母一起來中國。我們從去年開始認(rèn)識。從那時(shí)候起,我們成為好朋友了。
在周末,我們經(jīng)常一起打籃球,他打得非常好,而且,他歌唱得很好聽。他教我英語然后我教他中文。
我們永遠(yuǎn)都是好朋友。
初中英語作文范例三
A Rainy Day
Today is a rainy day and it’s cold with the temperature of 5℃. There are only a few people on the street and they all wear thick down coats and boots. They walk quickly and seem to go somewhere to escape from cold.
It has been cold for a very long time and this winter is colder than ever, but I like it very much because I was born in winter. Besides, in my oppion, only the coldness makes a real winter.
雨天
今天是一個(gè)雨天,而且很冷,溫度只有5℃。街上人很少而且他們都穿著厚厚的羽絨服和靴子。他們都走得很快似乎要走去某個(gè)地方來逃離寒冷。
這個(gè)冬天已經(jīng)冷了好長一段時(shí)間了,而且往年的冬天都要冷。但是,我非常喜歡它,因?yàn)槲沂窃诙斐錾。此外,我個(gè)人認(rèn)為,只有寒冷才能造就真正的冬天。
初中英語作文常用句型
常用于引言段的句型
1. Some people think that …. To be frank, I can not agree with their opinion for the reasons below.
2. For years, … has been seen as …, but things are quite different now.
3. I believe the title statement is valid because….
4. I cannot entirely agree with the idea that …. I believe….
5. My argument for this view goes as follows.
6. Along with the development of…, more and more….
7. There is a long-running debate as to whether….
8. It is commonly/generally/widely/ believed /held/accepted/recognized that….
9. As far as I am concerned, I completely agree with the former/ the latter.
10. Before giving my opinion, I think it is essential to look at the argument of both sides.
常用于正文段的句型
一、表示比較和對比的常用句型和表達(dá)法
1. A is completely / totally / entirely different from B.
2. A and B are different in some/every way / respect / aspect.
3. A and B differ in….
4. A differs from B in….
5. The difference between A and B is/lies in/exists in….
6. Compared with/In contrast to/Unlike A, B….
7. A…, on the other hand,/in contrast,/while/whereas B….
8. While it is generally believed that A …, I believe B….
9. Despite their similarities, A and B are also different.
10. Both A and B …. However, A…; on the other hand, B….
11. The most striking difference is that A…, while B….
二、演繹法常用的句型
1. There are several reasons for…, but in general, they come down to three major ones.
2. There are many factors that may account for…, but the following are the most typical ones.
3. Many ways can contribute to solving this problem, but the following ones may be most effective.
4. Generally, the advantages can be listed as follows.
5. The reasons are as follows.
三、因果推理法常用句型
1. Because/Since we read the book, we have learned a lot.
2. If we read the book, we would learn a lot.
3. We read the book; as a result / therefore / thus / hence / consequently / for this reason / because of this, we’ve learned a lot.
4. As a result of /Because of/Due to/Owing to reading the book, we’ve learned a lot.
5. The cause of/reason for/overweight is eating too much.
6. Overweight is caused by/due to/because of eating too much.
7. The effect/consequence/result of eating too much is overweight.
8. Eating too much causes/results in/leads to overweight.
四、舉例法常用句型
1. Here is one more example.
2. Take … for example.
3. The same is true of….
4. This offers a typical instance of….
5. We may quote a common example of….
6. Just think of….
常用于結(jié)尾段的句型
一、對全文進(jìn)行歸納總結(jié)的句型
1. From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that….
2. Taking into account all the factors, we may safely come to the conclusion that….
3. Judging from all the evidence offered, we may safely arrive at/reach the conclusion that….
4. All the evidence supports a sound conclusion that…
5. From what is mentioned above, we may come to the conclusion that…
6. To sum up/draw a conclusion, we find that….
7. In short/brief/a word/conclusion/sum/, it is….
8. Therefore/Thus/Then, it can be inferred/concluded/deduced that….
9. From/Through/According to what has been discussed above, we can come to/reach/arrive at/draw the conclusion that….
10. It is believed that….
二、表達(dá)個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)的句型
1. As far as I am concerned, I agree with the latter opinion to some extent.
2. As far as I am concerned, I am really/completely in favor of the test/policy.
3. In conclusion/a word, I believe that….
4. There is some truth in both arguments, but I think the disadvantages of… outweigh its advantages.
5. In my opinion/view, we should….
6. As for me, I….
7. As I see it, ….
8. From my point of view, ….
9. Personally, I think….
10. My view is that….
11. I think/consider….
12. I take/hold a negative/positive view of….
三、表達(dá)建議的句型
1. It’s high time that we tried every possible means to put an end to….
2. It’s really high time we took measures to solve the problem of/put an end to.…
3. There is still a long way to go towards solving the problem. We hope that efforts should be made to….
4. We must search for a quick action, because the present situation of… will surely lead to the end of….
5. There is no easy solution to the problem of…, but… might be useful.
6. There is no quick answer to the question of…, but … might be helpful.
7. It is necessary that effective/proper/quick actions/steps/measures be taken to….
8. It’s suggested that great efforts be made to….
9. It’s apparent/clear/obvious that the task of… requires immediate/considerable/great attention/efforts/consideration.
10. To check/control the tendency/trend is no easy task, and it requires a good/deep awareness/consciousness/understanding of….
議論文常用句型
1. It is a fact that….
2. It is well-known that….
3. There is no doubt that….
4. I think that….
5. Contrary to the popular thought, I prefer….
6. Some people say/believe/claim that….
7. It is generally believed that….
8. It is widely accepted that….
9. It is argued/held that….
10. While it is commonly believed that…, I believe….
11. It can be concluded that….
12. People’s views vary from person to person.
圖表作文常用句型
1. The table/diagram/bar chart/pie graph/tree diagram/curve graph /column chart shows/illustrates/reveals/describes/depicts/reflects that/how….
2. The graph provides some interesting data regarding….
3. The data/statistics/figures can be interpreted as follows:
4. The data/statistics/figures lead us to the conclusion that….
5. As is shown/demonstrated/exhibited in the diagram/graph/chart/table, ….
6. It is clear/apparent from the table/chart/diagram/figures that….
7. The vertical/horizontal axis stands for….
8. There was rapid/noticeable/great/sharp/steep/remarkable/slow/little/slight/gradual rise/increase/decrease/fall/decline/drop/change in development in ….
9. The percentage remained steady/stable at….
10. The figures stayed the same….
11. The figures bottomed out/peaked at….
12. The figures reached the bottom/a peak/a plateau during….
書信作文常用句型
1. I am writing to you in the hope that you could do me a favor to improve the horrible situation.
2. I would like some detailed information on/about….
3. I would be grateful if you could let me have details of ….
4. I am writing to request some necessary information about….
5. I am greatly concerned about….
6. My appreciation to you for your generous help is beyond words. I wish I could repay it one day.
7. Thank you very much for the kindness you showed me during….
8. It is my pleasure/a great honor for me to extend an invitation to/invite you to….
9. I will be expecting you, so do not disappoint me.
10. I wish to apply for the position of… with your company.
11. I graduated with a BA degree in…from…in….
12. I am very excited and delighted over the good news that you are recruiting a….
表達(dá)效果較好的特殊句型
1. 平衡句:用相同的結(jié)構(gòu)表達(dá)相似的意思
1) Ask not what your country can do for you; ask what you can do for your country.
2) We shall fight him by land, we shall fight him by sea, and we shall fight him in the air.
3) I am learning how to study, how to organize my time, and how to concentrate.
4) We must believe that we have the knowledge, and that we are competent enough to fulfil the task.
2. 省略句: 省略不影響句子意義的詞
1) Although exhausted by the demanding job, they refused to give up.
2) The road is very slippery as if covered with ice.
3) The sooner, the better.
4) Friends can be more dangerous than we sometimes suspect; developing real lifelong friendships much more difficult than we are willing to acknowledge.
5) Reformers are optimistic, conservatives pessimistic; conservatives live for the past, reformers the present and the future.
3. 倒裝句:將句子中的某一成分放在反常位置,以達(dá)到強(qiáng)調(diào)效果
1) In vain did they try to persuade the USA to give up violence.
2) Only by so doing can we expect to stop further pollution and create a better world for us and the future generations to live in.
3) Here comes the opportunity you have been longing for to realize your dream.
4) To such an extent have they polluted the area that plants can not grow.
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