上海高考英語(yǔ)滿(mǎn)分作文范文
【作文題目】
描述你在學(xué)校的一次午餐,具體要求如下:
詳細(xì)描述用餐的情況
簡(jiǎn)要表述你對(duì)這次午餐的感受
這是一篇簡(jiǎn)單卻需要挖掘的文章,因?yàn)槿绻皇敲枋鲇貌颓闆r,顯然缺乏深度,夸夸其談,流于表面。學(xué)生拿到這樣的題目需要仔細(xì)考慮用餐背后的東西。比較容易想到的話(huà)題是食物浪費(fèi)、用餐衛(wèi)生、餐桌禮儀等。在創(chuàng)作范文中,筆者另辟蹊徑,通過(guò)大多數(shù)同齡人用餐時(shí)的匆忙來(lái)襯托“我”的悠然自得,凸顯出在緊張的高中學(xué)生生涯中,作者能夠留有一片心靈凈土,通過(guò)飲食來(lái)調(diào)節(jié)情緒,更好地面對(duì)挑戰(zhàn),表現(xiàn)出樂(lè)觀(guān)的人生態(tài)度。此文結(jié)構(gòu)簡(jiǎn)單,文筆清新,語(yǔ)言精準(zhǔn),并運(yùn)用了高中階段常見(jiàn)的語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu),不失為一個(gè)很好的作文模板,供學(xué)生借鑒。
【作文范文】
The instant the bell indicating the endof the last class rang, out of theclassroompoured all students but one。Unlikemy peers, I was in no hurry tomake a run for the school canteen, to rush through lunch and to return to the classroomfor homework. I arrived at the canteenwhen amassive queue had formed.Waitingformy turn patiently, I smelled the aroma ofthe appetizing food. Greasy as some dishesmight be, thewide range of food preparedby the schoolwas superior in nutritional val-ue to that found
elsewhere.
The typical schedule of a highschooleris extraordinarily hectic and thus lunch breakis a rare timewhen overworked students canwind down and enjoy the pleasure providedby the flavorful food. Imake it a point topampermy taste buds by savoring every littlebit of taste in food.What I usually like todo over lunch is have amindless conversa-tionwith a couple of studentswho have alsolearnt to smell the roses along the bonebreaking journey through high school. Werounded off our lunch with a dessert, re-freshed and satisfied。 Come to think of it, it is not the foodbutmy attitude towards life that affordsmepleasure and empowersme in facing up tovarious challenges.
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